Was a bit off tempo and repetitive
You sort of repeated the same part of the song too long, and didnt break into the DUN DUH DUH DUH DUH DUH DUUUH DUH DUHDUH DUN DUH DUH DUN DUN untill about 1:30.
I did like what was good though.
Was a bit off tempo and repetitive
You sort of repeated the same part of the song too long, and didnt break into the DUN DUH DUH DUH DUH DUH DUUUH DUH DUHDUH DUN DUH DUH DUN DUN untill about 1:30.
I did like what was good though.
Thanks for the input, I know how I can make it better now Songwise, I was looking to see how I was doing soundwise on it however.
As for the tempo, I'm sort of thinking you're talking about the beginning part, and that's because the bass started lagging when I was exporting it (the exporting from GP is really fucked up) so it resulted in some off tempo beats, which I'll fix Next year when I do this.
But thanks!
Sounds like something from half-life
Really good but I may recomend perhaps putting a bit more push in there. Either with the main synth or the jungle drums.
More push, gotcha. Kinda hard to do with this slow of a bpm, but yeah I'll try. Thanks :D
Wow this is great
This is a great example of good dnb, which I was just explaining to my friend when I stumbled upon your song :D.
Perhaps a deeper sounding string synth though.
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...what?
This is creepy :(
In an omnious way. Like you're on your computer and you feel something behi
(0.o) you're right...
it is kind of creepy...
but i didn't notice until you said something. lol
Great
You took an eerie sort of song but made it sound more... like the world was coming to an end. I liked it alot though I would suggest using a louder or deeper sounding horn.
Much too quiet
an interesting loop but it's way to quiet and gets boring after awhile.
Oooooh
The pwn in this was bountiful. It was just really great in all ways :D.
Ugh
I really thought it could be alot better. You basicly just used the same loop over and over again until about 2 minutes in you used a different loop over and over again.
You could add another instrument or add more of a melody
well maybe if you listened to the whole thing before reviewing
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